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You were walking down the halls of the school. You hugged your books to your chest. You were the typical shy and nerd and none really noticed you. If someone talked to you it was because you were really smart and to do their homework. You didn't minded the fact that you were most likely ignored. Your only friends were Canada, Japan. You belonged to the quiet ones, you talked just when you were asked. You wish you would be more loud in nature, but it was just simple not you. You saw that the infamous 'Bad Touch Trio' were walking the opposite way of you. You looked down, not wanting to make eye contact. Then they stopped in front of you, blocking your way.

"Well, well...What do we have here?~" Prussia, the so called leader of the Trio said. You didn't understand why most of the girls drooled over them like they were Gods or something like that. They were disgusting perverts who use to think with the penis instead of the brain.

"Ohonhonhon~..Looks like we got a little plaything here, non?" France said with that creepy laugh that most girls giggled. That laugh made your skin crawl up and down.

"What is a beautiful chica like yourself all alone?~" Spain said with one of his charming smiles. Yes, you admited their were charming, hot and everything else in look, but in personality they were like rapist. They come up with compliments, seducing the girl then BANG! They got her in the bed.

"What do you want." you said under your breath.

"What was that, Frau?...Couldn't hear ya~" he said as he moved closer to you, grinning like a pervert.

"How about you and me, in the bathroom, now?~" he said as he played with the end of your skirt. You wanted to punch him, but you were weak and fighting wasn't something that you were best at. Out of nowhere a frying pan hit Prussia upside his head, making him fall to the ground.

"Arghh...What the fuck?" he asked as he turned around to saw Hungary all mad and his two best friends scared like hell.

"Get away from her, before I'm going to stick this pan inside your butt!" she yelled making the Trio run away.

"Hey [Name]! You okey?" she asked and you nodded.

"Yeah...Thanks for helping me." you said and gave her a hug.

"No problem. This three annoy the hell of me and I hate when I see them harassing girls." she said as he put her frying pan inside her bag.

"So [Name]? Wanna come to my house and have some dinner or watching a movie?!" she asked with a happy grin. You smiled.

"I'd love too." you said and gave her a kiss on her cheek. She blushed and took your hand. So you two run to her house, having a nice relaxing evening, without the Trio bothering you.
:bulletgreen:Request for :iconrosethornsofthevine:

I hope you like it^^:heart:

I don't own Hetalia and the characters.
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:iconkspowell2002:
Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
Hehehehe

He never saw it coming

Good story;);););)
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:iconmace062801:
Mace062801 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Artist
A Mexican and a Spaniard  the day I die!
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:iconlove-bug-2:
Love-bug-2 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
I NEED MOAR!!
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:iconreverseharemfan:
ReverseHaremFan Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is awesome :D :iconfrenchsquealplz:
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:iconanimevampy:
animevampy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Interface Designer
cccccooooooooooooollllllllllll
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
thanks :)
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:iconhetalia43v3r:
Hetalia43v3r Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YURI ALL THE WAY!
Great story~
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
thanks :D
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:iconhetalia43v3r:
Hetalia43v3r Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NP! (>^J^)> hug?
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Sure. *hugs you*
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:iconkawaiijunk:
KawaiiJunk Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHA PRUSSIA BE SCARED.
This was very cute. X)
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
thanks <3
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:iconashalynnx3321:
Ashalynnx3321 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
More please
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
X3
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Considering I'm a lesbian I had a complete fangirl over this~! Sorry Prussia but the only man I'd go bisexual for is Alucard~ but I prefer my girlies~

Btw. YURI ALL DA WAY!! :D

I loved your story! You are a great writer!
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
thank you very much, dudette :D
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
No problemo bro.
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:iconninjajaffacake:
NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   Artist
I'ma girl and I love Yuri. But that is explainable, I'm bisexual! xD
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
lol Girl, I like how straightforward you are. *smirks*
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:iconninjajaffacake:
NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013   Artist
lolol gotta be straight forward, might get eaten by the shy monsters if I'm not! o.o
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:icontexancowgirluvslovi:
TexanCowgirluvsLovi Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shy monsters...........?







Tell me more!Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] <da:emoticon id="459916837" profile="deviatiodevia
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NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014   Artist
Well, they like to hide and they blush a lot. They don't really like being monsters, but they will use their fuzzy powers to overwhelm you! XD
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:icontexancowgirluvslovi:
TexanCowgirluvsLovi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THEY SOUND ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!---!
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:iconninjajaffacake:
NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014   Artist
They do! :D They shall take over the world! ^^
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:icontexancowgirluvslovi:
TexanCowgirluvsLovi Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I shall accept this.
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NPOP Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student
Why am I looking at this I'm a girl! O__O
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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student General Artist
So am I, but I'm bisexual ♥
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
I'm a girl too...But ya know. Girls take car of each other at times.
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NPOP Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student
Thats true! I guess I didn't think about it that way! Love the story! <3
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
I'm glad to hear that X3
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chibiGaaLee Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OHGOD. I'M TOOTTALLY IN LOVE WITH IT!
No, really, i'm just like that x3
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
hehe X3
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GunnerHead Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OHMYFRICKINGGOSH IT'S SO FLUFFY!!

:iconitssofluffyplz:

Why is no one else doing fanfics with Elizabeta (she's one of my all-time favorite female characters: same with Belgium, Belarus, Liechtenstein, Ukraine, Vietnam, Taiwan, Monaco, Seychelles, Wy, Rin Tosaka, Saber, etc., etc.)?! I'm SO gonna fave it! *promptly does*
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
thank you:D
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GunnerHead Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Was this a first attempt or have you done others? 'Cuz if you have, I'd like to see them.

Maybe they're just as :iconitssofluffyplz: as this one! :D
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Well, this is my first try at a Fem!Country X Reader...
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:icongunnerhead:
GunnerHead Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was AWESOME for a first try! You should do some :iconmoarplz:
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
I will when I'm gonna finish all this requests that I have XD
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:icongunnerhead:
GunnerHead Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Take your time... no need to rush...
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:iconpockycat-chan:
Pockycat-chan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student General Artist
So Cute~ :iconitssofluffyplz:
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
thanks:D
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Davinastorm Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes! I Finely Found one with Fem Hungary!
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
YupX3
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RoseThornsoftheVine Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
I'm glad you do^_^
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