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Today, you finally had a day off, no more work and some time for you to relax and take a taste of the good life. You decided to pay a visit to some shops, but unlucky, nothing got your attention. Sure the clothes and shoes were cute, but not exaclly your style. After two hours of walking non-stop you took a break at a coffee shop. You took a seat at a table outside. It was very sunny and hot outside. Your favorite type of weather. What you didn't noticed was a mysterious guy stalking you. He was eyeing your purse and when you closed your eyes for some seconds, he run towards you and grabbed your purse in  fast move. You opened your eyes and you jumped up, trying to chase after him. Yelling for help, a police officer noticed him and in an instant he chased after him.

The thief run into an alley, the police officer after him. You run over there, cursing yourself for wearing heels today. When you took the corner of the alley, you saw the thief, on the ground and handcuffed.

"I think this is yours, chicka." The police officer, handed you your purse and smiled. He took the thief and pulled him into the back of his car. Just now you noticed how handsome the officer was. He had dark brown hair, tanned skin and the most beautiful green eyes you saw. He turned to you and smiled. That smile made your heart melt like a butter in the sun.

"You should be more carefull. Today this thief will steal anything from anyone. Even from beautiful womans." He said and winked at you. You smiled in a shy way, trying to hide the blush that was crosing your face.

"T-Thank you, Officer…" you said in a shaky voice.

"Please. Call me Antonio." He said in a happy voice like he got all the time in the world and nothing wrong could go on.

"I'm [Full Name]." You said extending a hand to him, to shake. Instead, he brought his lips on the top of your hand, then looking into your eyes. Your body froze at his actions. Alright, you were used to guys trying to flirt with you and stuffs like that, but he? You never thought a guy like him would see something in a woman like you. It wasn't the fact you were ugly. Actually you're very pretty, but there are gorgeous womans. So, why did he took an interest in you?

"So, [Name]? Do you have some plans tonight? Maybe we could go to dinner or something nice, like that?" he asked, leaning against his car with his arms crossed over his chest.

"Are you trying to ask me out?" you said with a raised eyebrow, crossing your arms over your chest. He chuckled, closing his eyes for a moment, then opening them again and stepping closer to you.

"You're a pretty smart chicka." He said in an amuzed voice, cupping one of your cheeks in his hand, his thumb brushing your lower lip.

"What do you say, [Name]? Let me show you how much of a nice guy I am?" he asked, his lips moving little by little, closer to yours. You didn't know what to say. I mean, you just meet him and he was asking you out on a date. He seemed like a nice and sweet guy, but then again, looks can be deceiving. While thinking of an answer, you noticed that hips lips were now on yours. The kiss was very gentle and sweet. He treated you like a porcelain doll. When he pulled away, his hand brushed against yours, your fingers tangling with his.

"Well? Give me the chance to know this mujer hermosa, complacer?" just now you noticed that he got a Spanish accent. You were a sucker for Spanish and Italian man. They say they're the best lovers in the world, next to the French ones.

"It would be a pleasure to meet this handsome and sweet guy." You said, trying to flash your best smile. He grinned and hugged you, kissing your cheek. You giggled at his reaction.

"Meet me at the coffee shop at 08:00 PM? This time without a thief." He said with a smirk. You giggled and played along.

"Sure thing, Officer. But in any case, get some handcuffs." You said in a flirty voice, winking at him. He chuckled and got in his car. Waving a kiss and driving away.

You turned around and walked home. Maybe it wasn't such a bad thing been robbed. You got a date with a hot Spanish police officer. Life really is good this days.
:bulletred:Red Police is here!~:iconsexyspainplz:

Sorry, if I didn't made it a lemon. I just couldn't bring myself to do it ;_;

I don't own anything, but the story. Picture is from zerochan.net

Sorry for any spelling and grammar errors.
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AshirogiHaku Featured By Owner Edited May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
hmm I wonder what was happening to the thief when he saw reader and toni just flirted with each other.....outside the car
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oniirinsama23 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015
hahahahahahahahahahaha.....what are the handcuffs for?
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animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
FUCK DA POLICE (literally)
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michelthekiler2 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student Digital Artist
damn spain why is yours the only one showing up and not the LEMONS?!?! Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon Rubi DAFUQ? icon 
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GlowIn0TheDark Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Student Artist
Hii!! I am from spain, just an Hetalia fan! *v*
I really loved your story!! <3
As i said, i am from spain, and i know spanish xD And some words that you writted in spanish are not correct, if you want to write another sweet story and spainards are related and you want a translator english-spanish send me a reply!! ;)
I just want to help so of you want any help tel me :)
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MeepandNeapftw Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm just wondering but how long have you been able to speak English?
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
Loved it ^_^
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ZefiaPROductions Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student General Artist
Best. Day. Ever!Hug Hug Hug Hug 
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:iconbrightpaw8:
brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
lemon lemon lemon....
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:iconn-cbyrnon:
N-Cbyrnon Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mon dieu.. Toni is just ..>///>
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:iconlovina-mayavargas:
lovina-mayavargas Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*chica, women, men.
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Skylox-Addiction Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Toni~Mew Smilie Blush 
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Peppermintkisses17 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh Mein Gott
That Picture Is Just-
Holy Shiat
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student General Artist
IKR!?
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AkaTheBacca Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Oh my dear lord-

That was just-

Hot-

O////O
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Elmo4Life Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Oh my god - OMG 
O///O loved it, was amazing, wish there was a second part, well done La la la la 
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Kswagg980 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
prt 2 pl
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nekosicily927 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Okay amazing fanfic but fix the grammar please.
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LilyRomanoVargas Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years

 

SORRY I DIDN'T START THIS I'M JUST VERY VERY SUPERSTITIOUS. FEEL FREE TO FLAG AS SPAM. IN FACT, PLEASE DO.

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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Do u really think this is true ??
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LilyRomanoVargas Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well to be honest no but I felt like repost this XD
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years



SORRY I DIDN'T START THIS I'M JUST VERY VERY SUPERSTITIOUS. FEEL FREE TO FLAG AS SPAM. IN FACT, PLEASE DO.
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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ok this is a spam ... But this isn't true ok !! (If and ya gain)
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years



SORRY I DIDN'T START THIS I'M JUST VERY VERY SUPERSTITIOUS. FEEL FREE TO FLAG AS SPAM. IN FACT, PLEASE DO.
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years



SORRY I DIDN'T START THIS I'M JUST VERY VERY SUPERSTITIOUS. FEEL FREE TO FLAG AS SPAM. IN FACT, PLEASE DO.
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rosyxD Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
 p.s. awesome fanfic and sorry for the chain 
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MExSpaniardAntonio Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student General Artist
What? No lemon?! I love dat sexy tomato bastard 'cuz he's MY sexy tomato bastard! *Antonio blushes burgandy*
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Kenz447 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
dawwwwww!!! so cute! btw chica doesn't have a k
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spain is so Sweet he got my purse back I got a date and there will probably be more later
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Catalyst-Lore Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years


Sorry for the chain

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Cristyceci Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Kagami7788 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kid, go step on a lego. In fact, step on a lego then a english PLUG!!! It does not work
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torlee10 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
This is why I don't have a purse!!!


...but if it gets me A date with a sexy cop....X3
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aisha101forever Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Shit.
Yesterday, there was helicopters,firetrucks and police cars/motorcycles around my next door neighbors and when they were done with the 'rage' they all waved while passing by.
I just totally froze up with a major blush.
All of those police and firefighters waving at me while passing by.
Damn.
I live in the ghetto it comes to good points at times.
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XxItaly-LovexX Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
:iconiggybrowsplz:
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
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teamveneziano Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love this fanfic~ I wonder what will happen next *wink* *wink* haha
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seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
damn. :3
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soldiergirlrenee Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Great but ya it should be a lemon but great anyways!!!!!
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Aliswonderland101 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Right when i stared to read this i heard the cop car outside
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
if i heard a cop car and was Reading this i would have thought "Spain must have sensed thats i was here"
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Fireblade626 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
HA!
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iwearamask10 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol
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SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lol I feel bad for the theif.

Thief: my god, will they just get a room already!!!!!
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AnimeGeek1205 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was just thinking that!!
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:iconsegarocker21:
SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yus! I'm not alone!!!!
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:iconanimegeek1205:
AnimeGeek1205 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!~
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SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconepicringoplz:
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AnimeGeek1205 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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siiben Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
really sweet story!!

funny in the end would be, when antonio drives away with the thief in the back seat and stopps after a few streets
"Thanx for your help, Fancis/Gilbert."

hihi
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