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Today, your albino boyfriend, the awesome Gilbert invited you to his house. You were kind of excited for what he planned. You and him were together for almost two years and very happy together. The love for him was unreadable. Some may consider him as arrogant, self-centered, narcissist and annoying. That may be true, but he was also loyal, funny, loving and very nice person if you try to know him better. You arrived at his house and knocked on the door only to meet a pair of happy red eyes.

"Kesesesese!~ Hallo, [Name]! I'm so glad you come!~" he said as he gave you a sweet kiss on the lips. You smiled back and hugged him.

"Of course I'd come. What kind of girlfriend would I be if I refuse?~" you said as you two laughed. "So, where's Ludwig?" you asked and the albino Prussian just smirked.

"He's at Italy's house. That means~…The house is all ours for the whole night~" he said as he kissed your neck, leaving butterfly kisses all along your neck to your collarbone. You let out moan as you pulled him closer, his hands rested on your waist and up and down your hips. You loved how he would touch you oh so loving. H was always gentle with you, like to a porcelain doll. He moved his kisses up to your jaw where he trailed his tongue to your ear, giving you goosebumps all over your skin.

"You're so cute, Liebe~" he purred in your ear, his mouth moving to your cheek and then licking your lower lip for entrance. You giggle and opened up for him. His tongue battled with yours for dominance in which he won easily. You moaned into the kiss, the heat of your bodies making you kind of dizzy. "Lets move this to the bedroom, ja?" he said as he picked you up bridal style and smirked at you.

"Ja~" you said in a low and seductive whisper, making him shiver. He run upstairs and kicked the door open, not bothering to close it. He sat you on the bed gently and crawled on top of you. He caressed you cheek gently and gave you a sweet smile, the one that made you heart melt with happiness. His hand moved to the end of your shirt and pulled it off of you, showing your [favorite color] lacy bra. He kissed you again on your neck, moving the kisses south to your collarbone and breast valley and on your stomach. Your moans were pleasure to his ears, knowing that none could ever made you so happy and pleasured.

"G-Gilbert~" when you called his name, it made him cry with joy and smirk. He truly loved you and not for your looks or body. Yes, he loved you for that too, but first it was the way you made him feel, that feeling that just the chosen one could make. The feeling that made him feel complete…..The feeling called love. He was with many women and girls before you and not even one of them could bring that feeling up. He loved them just because of the looks and the pleasure that they gave him. You, on the other hand, were something else. You could make him feel alive and bring everything nice out of him.

"Ich liebe dich, [Name], meine schöne Blume." He whispered on your lips, bring up the sweet and innocent smile of an angel on your delicious and angelic lips.

"I love you too, Gilbert." You said as you pulled him into a sweet and passionate kiss. The kiss didn't last long, before you two broke up for air. He pulled off his shirt and pants, leaving him just in black boxers. You blushed a little, since you didn't do this before. Is true, Gilbert didn't pushed you into something like this, unless you wanted too. That's what you loved about him. He wasn't demanding when it come to intimate actions, he would always go slow on you and wait when you were ready. He kissed you on the cheek then pulled your pants off, leaving you in matching panties with the bra. He brought you into another powerful kiss, his hands snaked around you and unhooked the bra, leaving your chest fully exposed to him. You blushed and crossed your hands on your breast in embarrassment.

"Don't hide from me, [Name]. You're beautiful just like an angel." With that he pulled your hands off of your chest gently. His mouth moved on one of your nipples, sucking and nipping slowly while his hand moved on the other one, massaging it gently and slowly. Your moans could be heard in the whole house and that made him very happy, letting everyone know that you were his and his alone. You were his angel.

His hands moved down to the waistband of your panties and pulled them down slowly, making you shiver in excitement. He smirked at how wet you were, wet all just because of him. He pulled his boxers down and trowed them in the corner of the room. He positioned himself at your entrance and looked deep down into your eyes.

"Are you ready, [Name]?" he asked in a serious voice, trying to see the answer in your eyes. You nodded.

"Yes, just be gentle. Is my first time." You said in a low whisper. He smiled and kissed your forehead.

"Of cours, Liebe." With that said he slowly entered you, trying to keep himself from not hurting you. You whimpered in pain, tears followed down your cheek and he kissed them away. Then he was full into you. He gave you a sweet kiss, trying to ease your pain. After some minutes, you adjusted to his size and nodded to him. He trusted slowly at first, giving you pleasure all the way up. Your moans made him pick up speed in his action, his trusts getting more powerful and fast. You both moaned and groaned from the ecstasy that was getting in your bodies. With a final trust you both reached your climax. He pulled out of you and hugged you to his chest.

"Promise me that you won't leave me." He whispered in your ear, making you smile.

"I would never leave you. I love you." You said as you kissed him on the lips, then pulled away. He smiled back at you.

"Ich liebe dich, auch." With that said you both feel asleep in each others arms.
:bulletpurple:Request for :iconwiralin:

I hope you like it:heart:

I tried to picture Prussia's sweet and caring side in this one. I mean, he may be arrogant and self-centered, but he still has a heart and he's very loyal.

I don't own Hetalia and the characters. I own just the story.
I wanna thank :iconlyrical-maisie: for helping me with the grammar and spelling errors.
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amberoffire Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Better than some Prussia lemons I've read. And MUCH better grammar.

Like, this one time I read a lemon that said,

"I'm glad thats over I hate introduces"

and I face palmed.

Facepalmed so hard.
Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Holy shit this story deserves 200 fucking comments!
Carlli2000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
Holy mother of... *nosebleeds*

Good job with the lemon!
amber14703 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Oh shat .
Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
and my ovaries just exploded...again...but since it's Gilly, it's all forgiven!~
this was really very sweet and adorable and loving. i love it so much!!!
MagdaTheHuman Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist
Eveethekiller Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years

plz don't judge me on this it was a dare
HellIsWhereYouBelong Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
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