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Let me held your hand,
The clock is running out,
Tik tok...what are you gonna do?
Poor unfortunate soul,
Let me take your heart out.


Again, you were up late at night, investigating the mysterious murders that happened recently in [your city name]. As a detective , you worked and stayed up very late in order to find the killer. At the moment, you know very little about the serial killer. You know that he is a male, the age is unknown, his victims are most young woman and couple of lovers. Another thing you know is that he kills at night, in abandoned alleyways and his signature weapon is a butcher knife, no longer than 15 inches. Is very interesting  how the killer managed not to leave a single clue about his identity, like fingerprints or hair, even skin DNA under the nails of the victims wasn't found. The killer was smart, that's for sure, but still, not even a little clue?

You sighed and hung your head down, you were tiered and sleepy. You really didn't sleep this nights that much and you sometimes forgot to eat. You decided to take a little break from the work and went to the kitchen to take a small snack. As you prepared some food you heard a knock on the door.

"Who could be at this hour?" you asked yourself as you went to the door and opened it, but there was no sight of anybody. You thought it was just some joke and closed it. You went to the kitchen, but then you saw the a window was wide open. Strange, because you always keep the window locked at night, even If you're awake. You closed it, then it was death silence. You feel like you were being watched, you really weren't the paranoid type, but that was just strange.

Then out of nowhere, a hand covered your mouth, muffling any screams that wanted to leave your lips. You were trowed on the wall, a yelp escaped your lips. When you saw who your attacker was, your eyes went in shock and fear.

"R-Roderich?" you whispered. You had meet him in one of your investigations. His wife was killed by the mysterious serial killer that you tried to find. You had developed a huge crush on him, but as a detective you really didn't had time for a relationship. You would never guessed that he, of all people was the wanted serial killer. He was like a gentleman, always nice and polite. His love for music was something your admired at him the most, the way he played the piano, it was almost magic.

But now, this so called gentleman was standing in front of you, with a sadistic grin on his handsome face, his violent eyes that were once full of happiness and care, held nothing, but insanity...and what you feared the most, the long butcher knife in his right hand.

"Well, hello there, [Name]~" he said in a voice that made your blood freeze in veins, like the water in a cold December.

"Y-You...no...this cannot be true.." you said in a shaking voice.

"Aw...not happy to see me? To bad~" he said in a fake sad voice, like he was playing with your mind. You were like a mouse, really to be eaten by the snake  in front of you.

"Y-You're the k-killer?" you asked, knowing the answer very well.

"Maybe...Maybe not...Why don't I show you." he said, and in a fast motion he had pinned you to the wall with his body, his hands on the each side of your head. You turned your head away from him, not wanting to face this violet eyes, that once you loved.

"Ignoring me? I'm hurt, [Name]. I thought you were my friend." he said, and got closer to your ear. "But....Maybe I was wrong." he growled, and you feel a sharp pain in your chest. You looked down to see the knife in the middle of your chest, deep down. The crimson and fresh blood running down to your feet. Before you closed your eyes, to let death consume you, your lips touched his cold lips in a gentle and soft kiss. You fell down with a thud on the hard floor. Then Roderich just realized what he had done.

"N-No...[Name]! You cannot die!! Please, come back!" he said as he held you to his chest, tears running down his cheeks on your pale and lifeless face. A big deep red pool of blood was already made and you two sat in the middle of it.

"[Name]...I love you." he said looking at your now pale face, you looked like a porcelain doll, a broken porcelain doll to be exact. His gaze turned to the knife on the floor not far away from where he was. He grabbed the knife quickly and held it to his chest. Without hesitation he stabbed himself deep down in the chest, letting the crimson liquid follow on the ground and mix with yours. He fell to the ground next to you. Before letting death consume him, like you did, he held your hand in his.

Both of you on the floor, in the middle of a pool made of yours blood, holding each others hand.




Maybe it was love after life~...


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I hope you like it:heart:
I know Austria is OCC in this and that there are grammar mistakes, so please, If you see any of this mistakes I be more than happy If you tell me so I can correct them, thank you:aww:

~NOTE~
If you want, just If you want, you can listen to this song{[link]} while reading this little story, it adds the athmosphere to the story and it makes it more mysterious.

I do not own Hetalia, Austria or the preview picture in any ways....Just the story is mine.
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SpruceTheMagicalTree Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This reminds me of romeo and juiliet because of the ending xD
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HetaTail Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I thought that too!
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Prussia22 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
WAAAAAAAA
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I love this!
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :)
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xxVoca-taliaxx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What is the name of the song that you linked? YouTube doesn't want to play it on my device....
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:iconraphaelatheturtel:
RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is the ending from Vampire Knight.
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Akatsukirochimaru Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Ahhh~ my heart hurts in sadness for the two~ T.T
I love it~
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, it was sad ;_;
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
oh dang wow~ this was awesome. I am not a huge Austria fan but still, this story sucked me in and I loved every minute of reading it^^
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much^_^ Glad you liked it
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
^^ welcome~
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dugherowngrave Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was beautiful.*sob* You know an also awesome song that goes with this is What Hurts the Most by Rascal Flatts.
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you^_^
I know that song, I like it very much:)
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LeeEmmaZee Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
ohhh nuuuu I died. D:
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry..there's always reincarnationX3
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LeeEmmaZee Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
oh yus good point
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StarBombs Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist

you're my favorite author ._. . . . <3333
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really? thank you^_^
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KittehLub Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Also Iris-Goo Goo Dolls
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup:3
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KittehLub Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lying From You by Linkin Park is also a good song to listen to while reading it :D Very good..
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you^^
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MelloObsesser235 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Writer
.......:icontearplz:.......Austria.....I hate(love) you...
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RaphaelaTheTurtel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is a hate-love thing :3
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